None of us are perfect. We all make errors when we are writing, often without even knowing it.
I’ve pulled out a sentence or two from everyone who has submitted paragraphs for me, just to show that everyone has made some kind of mistake. No mistake is better or worse than another. I’m not making fun of anyone’s sentences (and neither should you) and we’re not picking on anyone, just trying to make our sentences better.
I tried to find examples of fragments and run-ons, since we’ve been talking a lot about those.
Please have a look at the sentences in the file below and try to fix them up as best you can.